Chapter 1 of the Story of The Echo.

Andymercer
Archmage
2000 years ago there was a sub atomic cloud of dark matter circling the galaxy, the huge, dark cloud began spinning as it collapsed under it's own immense weight creating the largest implosion in the history of the human race. The light spread throughout the universe as one being emerged from the light. This living oraganism was known as Exponaught. This unisexual Mage was the founder of the Anitech. The Anitechts lived in harmony until the power surge finally got to one Mage. This Mage was known as HeadHunter for his blood lust to violently decapitate all who stood in his way. Exponaught watched HeadHunter closely as he worked his way to the top of the Anitech. Realising he could not be stopped alone, Exponaught split the Anitech into two different factions, the Animators and the Architects, Orange and Green.

This led to more willpower being wanted between the rival sides as one fought against the other. The war raged on for thousands of years until the Echo was discovered. The Echo was the sanctuary of the deceased Mage Exponaught, a place where all was calm and the Mages who entered would reveal the meaning of true Awakening. The Animators discovered this deep inside the mythical garden of Eden, the historic, ruined remains of the Echo would become the battle ground that decides which Faction has supremacy and has mastered world domination. For one civilisation to rise another must fall.

Chapter 2 will be added in a couple of days and yes it does get better don't worry.

Thankyou all who have read this and liked it, I appreciate the support.
4FoxSake
Archmage
Cool Andy good job

Edited by 4FoxSake (Nov. 12, 2011 13:44:22)

Andymercer
Archmage
Thankyou Fox
Corrie2
Channeler
That's so cool! Good job, I'm a writer myself and this has really inspired me! Well done andy
Andymercer
Archmage
Thankyou Corrie
Kamran
Evoker
Andy this is seriously amazing. Good job
Andymercer
Archmage
Thanks everyone
Tay21
Archmage
Are you still planning on adding more to this?

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